When I first found this I thought the text was funny, but then I noticed that the artist didn't include any gutter, just a thick border.
I also noticed that the color of the wall changes from panel to panel. I thought it was interesting to see how the artist handled the use of a copyrighted character. Since I haven't seen this comic before, I'm not sure how much the character changed.
The last thing I noticed on this comic was that even though the camera angle remained the same through all the panels, the zooming changed to add a little variety.

I think the gutter would have made it stronger for sure. It looks like it was drawn or inked solely on the computer? How about for your next post find a graphic novel at the library and see how longer stories work?
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